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Default I Need To Hammer Out The Flow...i Would Like To Record This - 09-09-2008, 10:22 AM

I NEED TO HAMMER OUT THE FLOW...I WOULD LIKE TO RECORD THIS

street feet beat across the tatered pages,(daily life)
hola-crayolas are new age slaves,(illegals)
colorless hardbacks daily working,
publishing site man nextel chirpin,(construction comp. using day workers)
it has no color but has color requirement,(laws)
better keep your crayon if you're tryna represent,(gangs)
children keep ya nose away from the lines
before you end up colorless, on a flat line,(drugs)
and you can color yours and ima color mines,(isolationism that ppl have toward each other)
while inventing colors that prevent combines(racism KEEPING THE RICH RICHER)
we're more than jus scribble in ya little notepad(rich ppl tha everyone works for)
couple billion strong shoudn't make us mad
its hard keepin billions neat inside the box (implementation of seperation oof races to keep rich rich)
dumb cartoons try to strain it, wit big crayon talk,(fuckers like al sharpton that are quick to point fingers but never really solve shit)
this coloring book can be bought at a womb near you(the world is the coloring book)
umblicals attached with favorite crayons too(ppl are reflection of upbringing)
  
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Default 09-09-2008, 04:12 PM

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gotta leave feed on someone else's poetry homie...


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Default 09-14-2008, 09:49 PM

6 days??? damn!!!


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Default 09-28-2008, 02:40 PM

its just kinda felt like you where trying to throw multis in there and it took away from the actual thing... so ya... i didnt like it that much sorry


  
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Default 09-29-2008, 02:45 AM

ima hammer out the flow itll sound good... if not it'll be one to get trashed! good look on the feed i forgot about this
  
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